GRE寫作題目(mu):
16"Although many people think that the luxuries and conveniences of contemporary life are entirely harmless, in fact, they actually prevent people from developing into truly strong and independent individuals."
GRE寫(xie)作(zuo)思(si)路(lu)解析及(ji)提綱(gang):
16 部分同意
1、現代(dai)生(sheng)活的便利確實使人們的對(dui)技術的依(yi)賴(lai)性越(yue)來越(yue)強
depend on automobile for travel; depend on calculator for calculation; depend on computer for writing
documents; depend on Internet for information(do not have to memorize)
2、但是現代(dai)生活的便利(li)也給人們帶來(lai)了挑戰,使變(bian)得 intellectually strong
to creat more convenience, further improvve technology develop to help make life more efficient;
people are expected for more productivity
3、工(gong)作的便利使(shi)人能(neng)夠(gou)獨(du)立完成(cheng)復雜任務
national survey analysis
16T "Although many people think that the luxuries and conveniences of contemporary life are entirely
harmless, in fact, they actually prevent people from developing into truly strong and independent
individuals." 16. 盡(jin)管(guan)很多人(ren)認(ren)為現(xian)在奢侈安逸的生(sheng)活(huo)是無害(hai)的,但(dan)實際(ji)上(shang)這樣的生(sheng)活(huo)阻止了(le)人(ren)們培養堅強獨(du)立
的性格
① I concede 有些時候有些人在得到安(an)逸生活以后就不思進(jin)取(qu)了。Davy, 晚(wan)年沒有什么(me)成就。
② 但是追求安逸的生活是科技發(fa)展和人類進步的動(dong)力。人們(men)追求更(geng)多(duo)的休閑(xian)時(shi)間,從而有了更(geng)高效的工(gong)作。
③ 如果缺(que)乏現(xian)在(zai)高科技所提供(gong)的舒適條件(jian),有(you)些研究(jiu)成果出不來。 如:生物(wu)學領(ling)(ling)域、軍(jun)事(shi)領(ling)(ling)域 都要求 25
sophisticated apparatus
Without modern facilities, we could hardly do anything.
While, without such modern facilities, can we become truly strong and independent individuals?
It is important for us to realize the limitation of modern facilities and that potential danger which will
be aroused if we lost our domination over modern facilities and too rely on them.